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  • Differences in the ARC and the full release

    I wanted to put this in the ARC forum, but the excessive Stickies are annoying me, so this is going here until nikhsub1 moves it.

    Edit: Erm... the ARC forum no longer exists... so... here we are.

    First things I have noticed, at the beginnings of the book:

    The yellow and green bookmarks (amazing) and the green and yellow endcloths from the binding (very cool)...

    ARC:
    no concordances

    Hardcover:
    concordances


    ARC:
    Copyright page for both Sam and Hailey:
    "Only Revolutions
    The Democracy Of Two
    Set Out & Chronologically Arranged

    [etc]

    [etc]"

    Sam's TriColor: 355U, 7405U, 2602U
    Hailey's TriColor: 146U, 355U, 2602U

    And neither say anything about the concordance

    Sam's "Fonts by order of arrival:" Life, Dante MT, Lucida, Perpetua, Tempo, Myriad Pro, Spectrum MT & Univers 57
    Hailey's "Fonts by order of arrival:" Life, Dante MT, Lucida, Perpetua, Tempo, Myriad Pro, Spectrum MT & Univers 57

    Nothing about Jessica Grindstaff.

    Hardcover:
    Copyright page on both sides:
    "Only Revolutions
    The Democracy Of Two
    Set Out & Chronologically Arranged

    This is a work of fiction. Though some characters, actions,
    and exchanges align with historical events, the totality
    of the novel-from mechanism to motion to mood-
    is a product of the author's imagination."

    then some normal copyright stuff with in grey.

    then

    Sam's TriColor: 356U, 146U, 2602U
    Hailey's TriColor: 146U, 356U, 2602U

    Both sides say "B/W Double Volumes without Concordance"

    Sam's "Fonts by order of arrival:" Life (Endpapers), Dante MT (Title), Lucida (inf), Perpetua (dedication), Tempo (Dates), Myriad Pro (Chronomosaics), Spectrum MT (Sam) & Univers 57 (Folio)
    Hailey's "Fonts by order of arrival:" Life (Endpapers), Dante MT (Title), Lucida (inf), Perpetua (Dedication), Tempo (Dates), Myriad Pro (Chronomosaics), Spectrum MT (Hailey) & Univers 57 (Folio)

    Mentions of Jessica Grindstaff.

    "Expiration date: Now" is upside down, with the opposite character's colors. (upside down and yellow 'o's on Sam's side)

    There are also color things that are very interesting, but I will not really consider these "differences" because the ARCs are B&W.
    Last edited by Ellimist; 09-13-2006, 07:18 PM.

  • #2
    pages 207 and 348 and 359

    ARC:
    H204: []ordan
    H207: Chlo[]ofluorocarbons
    (missing letters)

    Hardcover:
    H204: Jordan
    H207: Chlorofluorocarbons
    (letters are back)


    ARC:
    H210: [J]ohn
    H210: 60[,]000
    H214: Co[l]ombia's
    H214: 40[,]000
    H215: 30[,]000
    H216: 200[,]000

    Hardcover:
    these are all fixed


    ARC:
    S348: Patience. Their Value. Because I am without value.
    H348: Temperaments. Their Worth. Because I am without worth.

    Hardcover:
    S348: Patience. Their Resolve. Because I am without value.
    H348: Temperaments. Their Gall. Because I am without worth.


    ARC:
    H359: top right circle - no || (accidentally left out?)

    Hardcover:
    H359: top right circle - there is a ||
    Last edited by Ellimist; 09-13-2006, 12:51 PM.

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    • #3
      pages 84 and 85

      ARC:
      S84: someway
      S84: you're not so robust
      H84: allone moaning

      H85: somehow gets a teensy brave

      Hardcover:
      S84: some way
      S84: you're not that robust
      H84: moaning allone

      H85: somehow gets a teensybit brave
      Last edited by Ellimist; 09-13-2006, 04:44 PM.

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      • #4
        page 242

        ARC:
        H242: we so whistfully slip for,

        Hardcover:
        H242: we so wistfully slip for,

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        • #5
          thanks for doing all this. your work is much appreciated.

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          • #6
            Really great !

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            • #7
              H3 (ARC): releasing rivers shlick beneath
              H3 (Hardcover): releasing rivers shhlick beneath

              H4 (ARC): The Mountain descends from and
              I laugh...
              H4 (Hardcover): The Mountain descends from
              and I laugh...

              H8 (ARC) : -- Clumzy. Clutzoid ! He haws.
              H8 (Hardcover) : -- Clumzy. Clutzoid ! he haws.

              H8 (ARC) : My serenity wipes out his
              gall.
              H8 (Hardcover) : My serenity wipes out
              his gall.

              Just notice that most of the differences are in the historical sidebar (got them from H1 to H10) and are about ponctuation or disposition of some words in the column. Except :
              H7 (ARC) : FBI & Oswald allone
              H7(Hardcover) : Oswald allone & FBI.

              In order to go faster, I thing I'm gonna stop to compare the historical matter. Just focus on the main text.
              Stay tuned.

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              • #8
                Just notice that i'm reporting the differences in the ARC and the full release in H side.
                So I will write the H's page number like this : (8)
                The ARC's text like this : [Arc's text]
                following by the Hardcover's text.

                (14)
                [I Play for The End I Delay.]
                I Delay for The End I Play.


                (15)
                [Can't grant her a five on five.]
                Can't grant HER a five on five.

                (16)
                [Though allso yuck.]
                Though allso yucky.

                [Allready a wildreness.]
                Allready a wilderness.

                (17)
                [and bur, quickly cling to him.]
                and burr, quickly cling to him.

                [ -- Worthless loser.]
                -- Worthless poltroon.

                [Until over a rise all
                come across a campfire.]
                Until over a rise all come
                across a campfire.

                (18)
                [gynaecocrasy]
                gynaecocracy

                (20)
                [and his paltry fists, hurling
                the reprobate from their midst, fast]
                and his paltry fists, hurling the
                rapscallion from their midst, fast

                (23)
                [wheeling back with Whoa !]
                wheeling back with a -- Whoa !

                [the softlope foolery of a
                a ropeadope grope.]
                the softlope foolery of
                a ropeadope grope.

                (24)
                [Guitar, Flute & Tamborine]
                Guitar, Flute & Tambourine

                (26)
                [Notching and timbering]
                Notching and atimbering

                (28)
                [tightclutching my enviable mound,
                from gulch, gully and gorge
                all over, Angry Mangy]
                tightclutching my enviable mound,
                swarming from gulch, gully and gorge,
                and by, Angry Mangy

                (30)
                [Even earth simpers with feer.]
                Even soil simpers with feer.

                (31)
                [I blunder until riled Hoards]
                I blunder until teeming Hordes

                (34)
                [spares me, stalks me,
                dares me to crisp]
                sparing me, stalking me,
                daring me to crisp

                (35)
                [Prairie Corneflower]
                Prairie Corneflowers

                (36)
                [Bleakness surroundig his
                small hands]
                Bleakness surrounding
                his small hands (This one probably push "impact" away from the page number. So I won't notice such changes anymore.)

                (39)
                [smokey with heat]
                smoky with heat

                (46)
                [Belly flops among bewilderded]
                Belly flops among bewildered

                (47)
                [Away quick his
                flouncy overalls. Beat. Leave socks.]
                Away quick his
                overalls. Flouncy. Beat. Leave socks.

                [Magnificent tits. Pinched.]
                Magnificent tits. Gripped.

                (51)
                [Pssssssssing allso streams of]
                Pssssssssing streams allso of

                (52)
                [a Leftwrist Twist Bracelet]
                a Lefwrist Bracelet

                [I'm bat too with]
                More so I'm bat with

                (53)
                [Only capless Sam ups getting horny,
                oggling]
                Only capless Sam ups for horny,
                ogling

                (55)
                [hard whacking]
                hardwhacking

                Hope i've been clear enough with this method. If not, don't hesitate to tell me.
                Stay tuned.

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                • #9
                  I really like the new method. And WOW, that's a lot of changes...

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                  • #10
                    Thanks, Ellimist !
                    *************************
                    Now, for the new comers :"Just notice that i'm reporting the differences in the ARC and the full release in H side.
                    So I will write the H's page number like this : (8)
                    The ARC's text like this : [Arc's text]
                    following by the Hardcover's text."
                    *****************************

                    (57)
                    [honks and nickles]
                    honks and nickels

                    (58)
                    [Still Sam scootches over, gripping
                    my breast, pinching my leg]
                    Still Sam scootches over, grabbing
                    my breast, slapping my leg

                    (60)
                    [dodging the draft. You ?]
                    dodging zee draft. You ?

                    (61)
                    [scattering Picnicers]
                    scattering Picnickers

                    (62)
                    [Morels and Mulberries whipper
                    sadly then]
                    Morels and Mulberries sadly
                    whipper then

                    (63)
                    [THESE LURPSs plopping
                    down hard,]
                    THESE LURPs plopping
                    down hard, ("down hard, in the hard cover is on the left of the page in the ARC, on the right in the Hardcover)

                    (64)
                    [every IMPRESSED
                    frayed. Until]
                    every IMPRESSED
                    frays. Until


                    That's all for today.
                    Stay tuned.

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                    • #11
                      I apologize for not having the book at hand, but I checked last night; I think I got the page number right...

                      (H 81(?))
                      [—Chattanooga! Baton Rouge! Achorage!
                      A confouding one.]
                      Chattanooga! Baton Rouge! Anchorage!
                      A confounding one.

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                      • #12
                        I was wondering about that... Thanks, hello?.

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                        • #13
                          Allways in H side :

                          (65)
                          [Foam, paddle and plead.]
                          Foams, paddles and pleads.

                          (67)
                          [But allso curious] is aligned left
                          But allso curious (in the middle of the line)

                          (68)
                          [When pangs of hunger rapidly arrive]
                          And pangs of hunger rapidly arrive

                          (69)
                          [And dominate. Chuckles then,]
                          And dominate. Chuckles given,

                          (70)
                          [By a CREEP allways restrained]
                          By THE CREEP allways restrained

                          [ -- Grovel now, Sam quips.
                          Thanks to me he just flipped US the grits]
                          -- Grovel now, Sam quips. Thanks
                          to me sitch just flipped US the grits

                          (71)
                          [Potawatamies, Stumblebums
                          and Banshees.
                          But I'm their only range by a
                          stranger ferocity. One I cannot meet
                          but must seek.]
                          Potawatomies, Stumblebums
                          and Bandshees.
                          But I'm the only range by a stranger
                          ferocity. One I cannot meet but
                          must seek.

                          [Tacky with acne.
                          High and tight sure.]
                          Antic with acne.
                          High and tight doof.

                          [He slows. Pulls over.] (aligned left)
                          He slows. Pulls over. (centered)

                          (73)
                          [The wide blast.]
                          The wide bang.

                          (74)
                          [With Cookie Pies, Candy Pies, Jello]
                          With Cookie Pies, Candy Pies, JellO

                          [Tarte Tatins and Linzertorte's topped]
                          Tarte Tatins and Linzertortes topped

                          [Pecan. Marrionberry, Butterscotch]
                          Pecan. Marionberry, Butterscotch



                          That'all for today.
                          Stay tuned.
                          Last edited by g@rp; 09-23-2006, 10:48 AM.

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