Differences in the ARC and the full release

[Ellimist]

I wanted to put this in the ARC forum, but the excessive Stickies are annoying me, so this is going here until nikhsub1 moves it.

Edit: Erm... the ARC forum no longer exists... so... here we are.

First things I have noticed, at the beginnings of the book:

The yellow and green bookmarks (amazing) and the green and yellow endcloths from the binding (very cool)...

ARC:
no concordances

Hardcover:
concordances
<HR>
ARC:
Copyright page for both Sam and Hailey:
"<font color=#B915CF>O</font>nly Rev<font color=#C9A214>o</font>luti<font color=#19B20B>o</font>ns
The Democracy Of Two
Set Out & Chronologically Arranged

[etc]

[etc]"

Sam's TriColor: 355U, 7405U, 2602U
Hailey's TriColor: 146U, 355U, 2602U

And neither say anything about the concordance

Sam's "Fonts by order of arrival:" Life, Dante MT, Lucida, Perpetua, Tempo, Myriad Pro, Spectrum MT & Univers 57
Hailey's "Fonts by order of arrival:" Life, Dante MT, Lucida, Perpetua, Tempo, Myriad Pro, Spectrum MT & Univers 57

Nothing about Jessica Grindstaff.

Hardcover:
Copyright page on both sides:
"<font color=#B915CF>O</font>nly Rev<font color=#C9A214>o</font>luti<font color=#19B20B>o</font>ns
The Democracy Of Two
Set Out & Chronologically Arranged

This is a work of fiction. Though some characters, actions,
and exchanges align with historical events, the totality
of the novel-from mechanism to motion to mood-
is a product of the author's imagination."

then some normal copyright stuff with House in grey.

then

Sam's TriColor: 356U, 146U, 2602U
Hailey's TriColor: 146U, 356U, 2602U

Both sides say "B/W Double Volumes without Concordance"

Sam's "Fonts by order of arrival:" Life (Endpapers), Dante MT (Title), Lucida (inf), Perpetua (dedication), Tempo (Dates), Myriad Pro (Chronomosaics), Spectrum MT (Sam) & Univers 57 (Folio)
Hailey's "Fonts by order of arrival:" Life (Endpapers), Dante MT (Title), Lucida (inf), Perpetua (Dedication), Tempo (Dates), Myriad Pro (Chronomosaics), Spectrum MT (Hailey) & Univers 57 (Folio)

Mentions of Jessica Grindstaff.

"Expiration date: Now" is upside down, with the opposite character's colors. (upside down and yellow 'o's on Sam's side)
<HR>There are also color things that are very interesting, but I will not really consider these "differences" because the ARCs are B&W.

[Ellimist]

ARC:
H204: []ordan
H207: Chlo[]ofluorocarbons
(missing letters)

Hardcover:
H204: Jordan
H207: Chlorofluorocarbons
(letters are back)
<HR>
ARC:
H210: [J]ohn
H210: 60[,]000
H214: Co[l]ombia's
H214: 40[,]000
H215: 30[,]000
H216: 200[,]000

Hardcover:
these are all fixed
<HR>
ARC:
S348: Patience. Their Value. Because I am without value.
H348: Temperaments. Their Worth. Because I am without worth.

Hardcover:
S348: Patience. Their Resolve. Because I am without value.
H348: Temperaments. Their Gall. Because I am without worth.
<HR>
ARC:
H359: top right circle - no || (accidentally left out?)

Hardcover:
H359: top right circle - there is a ||

[Ellimist]

ARC:
S84: someway
S84: you're not so robust
H84: allone moaning

H85: somehow gets a teensy brave

Hardcover:
S84: some way
S84: you're not that robust
H84: moaning allone

H85: somehow gets a teensybit brave

[Ellimist]

ARC:
H242: we so whistfully slip for,

Hardcover:
H242: we so wistfully slip for,

[benedict]

thanks for doing all this. your work is much appreciated.

[g@rp]

:clap: Really great !

[g@rp]

H3 (ARC): releasing rivers shlick beneath
H3 (Hardcover): releasing rivers shhlick beneath

H4 (ARC): The Mountain descends from and
I laugh...
H4 (Hardcover): The Mountain descends from
and I laugh...

H8 (ARC) : -- Clumzy. Clutzoid ! He haws.
H8 (Hardcover) : -- Clumzy. Clutzoid ! he haws.

H8 (ARC) : My serenity wipes out his
gall.
H8 (Hardcover) : My serenity wipes out
his gall.

Just notice that most of the differences are in the historical sidebar (got them from H1 to H10) and are about ponctuation or disposition of some words in the column. Except :
H7 (ARC) : FBI & Oswald allone
H7(Hardcover) : Oswald allone & FBI.

In order to go faster, I thing I'm gonna stop to compare the historical matter. Just focus on the main text.
Stay tuned.

[g@rp]

Just notice that i'm reporting the differences in the ARC and the full release in H side.
So I will write the H's page number like this : (8)
The ARC's text like this : [Arc's text]
following by the Hardcover's text.

(14)

I Delay for The End I Play.


(15)
[Can't grant her a five on five.]
Can't grant HER a five on five.

(16)
[Though allso yuck.]
Though allso yucky.

[Allready a wildreness.]
Allready a wilderness.

(17)
[and bur, quickly cling to him.]
and burr, quickly cling to him.

[ [I]-- Worthless loser.]
-- Worthless poltroon.

[Until over a rise all
come across a campfire.]
Until over a rise all come
across a campfire.

(18)
[gynaecocrasy]
gynaecocracy

(20)
[and his paltry fists, hurling
the reprobate from their midst, fast]
and his paltry fists, hurling the
rapscallion from their midst, fast

(23)
[wheeling back with Whoa !]
wheeling back with a -- Whoa !

[the softlope foolery of a
a ropeadope grope.]
the softlope foolery of
a ropeadope grope.

(24)
[Guitar, Flute & Tamborine]
Guitar, Flute & Tambourine

(26)
[Notching and timbering]
Notching and atimbering

(28)
[tightclutching my enviable mound,
from gulch, gully and gorge
all over, Angry Mangy]
tightclutching my enviable mound,
swarming from gulch, gully and gorge,
and by, Angry Mangy

(30)
[Even earth simpers with feer.]
Even soil simpers with feer.

(31)
[I blunder until riled Hoards]
I blunder until teeming Hordes

(34)
[spares me, stalks me,
dares me to crisp]
sparing me, stalking me,
daring me to crisp

(35)
[Prairie Corneflower]
Prairie Corneflowers

(36)
[Bleakness surroundig his
small hands]
Bleakness surrounding
his small hands (This one probably push "impact" away from the page number. So I won't notice such changes anymore.)

(39)
[smokey with heat]
smoky with heat

(46)
[Belly flops among bewilderded]
Belly flops among bewildered

(47)
[Away quick his
flouncy overalls. Beat. Leave socks.]
Away quick his
overalls. Flouncy. Beat. Leave socks.

[Magnificent tits. Pinched.]
Magnificent tits. Gripped.

(51)
[Pssssssssing allso streams of]
Pssssssssing streams allso of

(52)
[a Leftwrist Twist Bracelet]
a Lefwrist Bracelet

[I'm bat too with]
More so I'm bat with

(53)
[Only capless Sam ups getting horny,
oggling]
Only capless Sam ups for horny,
ogling

(55)
[hard whacking]
hardwhacking

Hope i've been clear enough with this method. If not, don't hesitate to tell me.
Stay tuned.

[Ellimist]

I really like the new method. And WOW, that's a lot of changes...

[g@rp]

Thanks, Ellimist ! :smile:
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Now, for the new comers :"Just notice that i'm reporting the differences in the ARC and the full release in H side.
So I will write the H's page number like this : (8)
The ARC's text like this : [Arc's text]
following by the Hardcover's text."
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(57)
[honks and nickles]
honks and nickels

(58)
[Still Sam scootches over, gripping
my breast, pinching my leg]
Still Sam scootches over, grabbing
my breast, slapping my leg

(60)
[dodging the draft. You ?]
dodging zee draft. You ?

(61)
[scattering Picnicers]
scattering Picnickers

(62)
[Morels and Mulberries whipper
sadly then]
Morels and Mulberries sadly
whipper then

(63)
[THESE LURPSs plopping
down hard,]
THESE LURPs plopping
down hard, ("down hard, in the hard cover is on the left of the page in the ARC, on the right in the Hardcover)

(64)
[every IMPRESSED
frayed. Until]
every IMPRESSED
frays. Until


That's all for today.
Stay tuned.

[hello?]

I apologize for not having the book at hand, but I checked last night; I <i>think</i> I got the page number right...

(H 81(?))
[—<i>Chattanooga! Baton Rouge! Achorage! </i>
A confouding one.]
—<i>Chattanooga! Baton Rouge! Anchorage!</i>
A confounding one.

[katatonic]

I was wondering about that... Thanks, hello?.

[g@rp]

Allways in H side :

(65)
[Foam, paddle and plead.]
Foams, paddles and pleads.

(67)
[But allso curious] is aligned left
But allso curious (in the middle of the line)

(68)
[When pangs of hunger rapidly arrive]
And pangs of hunger rapidly arrive

(69)
[And dominate. Chuckles then,]
And dominate. Chuckles given,

(70)
[By a CREEP allways restrained]
By THE CREEP allways restrained

[ -- Grovel now, Sam quips.
Thanks to me he just flipped US the grits]
-- Grovel now, Sam quips. Thanks
to me sitch just flipped US the grits

(71)
[Potawatamies, Stumblebums
and Banshees.
But I'm their only range by a
stranger ferocity. One I cannot meet
but must seek.]
Potawatomies, Stumblebums
and Bandshees.
But I'm the only range by a stranger
ferocity. One I cannot meet but
must seek.

[Tacky with acne.
High and tight sure.]
Antic with acne.
High and tight doof.

[He slows. Pulls over.] (aligned left)
He slows. Pulls over. (centered)

(73)
[The wide blast.]
The wide bang.

(74)
[With Cookie Pies, Candy Pies, Jello]
With Cookie Pies, Candy Pies, JellO

[Tarte Tatins and Linzertorte's topped]
Tarte Tatins and Linzertortes topped

[Pecan. Marrionberry, Butterscotch]
Pecan. Marionberry, Butterscotch



That'all for today.
Stay tuned.